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Valentine's

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ok so I have no idea how to start this poem
But I know I want to use a cheesy cliche
So shall I compare thee to a summer's day
Or maybe I'll count the ways you make me smile
... actually im saying this out loud and it sounds really lame, so I'm not doing that.
How about I just say it like it is
Because the fact of the matter is
Im writing this because you're so much fun to spend time with
Your so smart with stupid jokes and I love it
Cuz while I call them stupid their still halarious
Funny enough to make me stop caring whose hearing us
And i can lose myself in this ruckus
And I'll admit im not the best conversationalist
But thats because I get distracted by your gorgeousness
Because lets face it your gorgeous
I mean I  could write a whole epic about your hair Or your smile or your eyes
or even the way you make my asthma act up and I cant breath when im around you which is probably why it took me a whole semester to ask you out
Because i was afraid I might have to go to the hospital from your shear awesomeness
So while this poem didn't go exactly like what I had in mind
I hope your answer will stay in line with what I'm trying to find
(There was a better way to say that... it just didn't rhyme)
So izzy...
Will you be my Valentine?
So this is technically a rough draft since I already used this to ask a girl to be my Valentines (she said yes by the way:score: V3 ) and I said it slightly different than this, but this isn't to far off. She liked it :)
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KittySib's avatar
So cute!:D Congrats!